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Margaret Dru

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: More than emotion but less than a life

    The title, in my opinion, says the most here. It really is well put. I like the, for the most part, subtle rhyming. Lengthening the stanzas with a bit more ...

    Oct 15, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Slavery

    For the most part it's really nice, but I feel like you should have more to it. Because it's so short, and like you said, a little cliche, adding on ...

    Oct 15, 2007


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
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